Friday, October 26, 2007

captain kidd

One day on Captain Kidds ship it was a nice day because it was a blue sky no clouds and the crew and the captain was just lazing around the ship.Then the sun was blocked from some big rain and thunder clouds. It was pouring down with rain and the thunder went boom!bang! boom. The boat rocked from the huge waves and the crew was frightened but Captain kidd said '' It's all right it's just rain and thunder'' BOOOM! the captain was scared. ''It's all right captain it's just rain and thunder shouted Rj. All night the captain shivered in fear but the crew slept like babies all night and in the morning the captain and the crew went outside and the storm was not gone and the boat was still rocking .In the middle off the day the storm was gone. For the rest off the day was fine and the Captain and the crew had a nice day except for the night ...... then BOOM! BANG! it was back with reinforcements CAPTAIN BLACK BEARD AND HIS CREW came to get them.They had a fight and Captain Kidd and his crew won. Then they had a party and they had a great time with out the storm or Captain Black beard and his crew.

The end By Ryan

1 comment:

room4 said...

What a great story Ryan. I like the wonderful descriptive language you have used.